The wilderness is now becoming less and less explored because of those not leaving their homes and being unable to experience it firsthand in order to form their own opinions on what the wilderness is. While Krakauer was on his journey to the bus, they discuss the fact that McCandless decided to go into the wilderness without a map. Krakauer reports that “Andy Horowitz, one of McCandless’s friends on the Woodson high cross-country team, had mused that Chris ‘was born into the wrong century. He was looking for more adventure and freedom then today’s society gives people.’” (356). This quote from Horowitz explains McCandless not using a map for his adventure. McCandless is said to be “born into the wrong century” which is because in our current century people are not like McCandless where they would go out and explore what is unknown to them. In the current century most people are content with staying in their homes, which is the reason why people have trouble forming their own opinions on what the wilderness is. If people in today’s society become more adventurous, then those of the current century can figure out what the wild is in their own mind like McCandless is able to do. Experiencing the wild is something that can only be done the further we are from civilization. People who live in cities have less experience with the wild than those who live further from urban environments, thus those who live further from the city have a better understanding of what the wilderness is. Abram took a trip to Bali in Indonesia and was able to witness firsthand why being away from an urban environment is beneficial. Abram observes “ Over my head the black sky was rippling with stars, densely clustered in some regions, almost blocking out the darkness between them, and more loosely scattered in other areas”(2). When Abram steps outside his hut he takes notice to the massive amounts of stars in the sky. Abram uses the phrase “rippling with stars” because of his unfamiliarity with this type of view. Abram had been in the United States while doing street magic, which means that he isn’t used to this view because of the fact that stars aren’t as readily seen in the night sky around cities and populated areas. Abram has an experience that is only possible by one distancing themselves from their home and urban environment. The wilderness has become less explored because of the lack of adventurism in today’s society and because of the distance that lies between themselves and unfamiliar places which they dare not venture too.
Sunday, March 20, 2011
Revision
The connections between mankind and animals formed by each author are inaccurate observations. Although both groups demonstrate surprising similarities and differences, it is unfair to generalize humans into one category. Seibert's generalization of humans as anthropocentric beings in an industrial world limits his argument/ His writing was to persuade the audience to move from selfishness to selflessness. A fellow colleague of Seibert's, psychologist Gay Bradshaw, is the first to propose the "trans-species psyche" or a "commitment to move beyond an anthropocentric frame of reference and, in effect, be elephants" (537 Seibert). Bradshaw suggest getting path anthropocentric and adopting anthropomorphism instead. When Seibert speaks of "commitment", he is implying that this shall be a long term effort. While Bradshaw's proposal seems like an effective solution to the ongoing war between man and nature, the argument is not valid for all audiences. Abram's writing struggles the same way Seibert's writing does. Yet Abram contrasts Seibert's approach through the differences exhibited between the human and non-human worlds. He describes the dissimilarities by saying "we cannot know, with the same familiarity and intimacy, the lived experiences of a grass snake or a snapping turtle; we cannot readily experience the precise sensations of a hummingbird sipping nectar from a flower" (10). The lack of familiarity and intimacy with the non-human world creates a boundary between each realm. However, there exists a mediator. Abram speaks of this mediator as a sorcerer with "the ability to readily slip out of the perceptual boundaries that demarcate his or her particular culture...in order to make contact with, and learn from, the other powers in this land..." (7). Abram concludes that there must be a mediator between each world, rather than directly imposing a solution such as Bradshaw did. Man must understand that one cannot look to solve the conflict by conjoining human and non-human, but instead bridge the gaps to work cooperatively. In essence, the idea of an anthropomorphic solution is actually quite anthropocentric. Believing that man is the only creature capable of offering a solution is narcissistic. Yet the fragile rapport that exists due to shaman, only seems apparent in rural, less technologically developed worlds. The role of mediator would never survive in the "western world". However, through connecting the approaches of each author, it appears they overlap and there is a medium between the two.
Inner Wild
A Loss of Control
Deep into the Wilderness
Revision Paragraph-Boundaries
An In-Depth Look at Wilderness
Humans retreat into the wilderness because they do not feel like they belong in the civilized world. Chris McCandless retreated to Alaska because he was sickened by human society, including his dad who had “been a bigamist at one time and that kind of went across [his] grain” (Krakauer 346). Stuckey’s use of the word grain is symbolic because cutting wood across the grain is very difficult and often leaves rough edges. By leaving society McCandless is attempting to start anew and let nature cut him going with the grain to reshape him into a new man. The Lord’s Resistance Army in Uganda uses a similar tactic when they recruited boys by “killing the parents of young males before their eyes…before pressing them into service as child soldiers” (Siebert 533). Both McCandless and the young males are being shaped, but while McCandless is being shaped to rid himself of the wilderness of society, the young males are being shaped into a form of wilderness. Therefore, wilderness is not a location; instead it is a mindset in which the wilder and untamed side of a person’s personality is put into practice. The self-centered behavior described by Siebert is also apparent in Abram’s essay when he illustrates how the “expressive and sentient landscape slowly faded behind [his] more exclusively human concerns” (19). In this case the wilderness is not being expressed as a carnal and savage behavior, but more of aloofness to everything and everyone else in society. From Abram’s perspective the emphasis is not on the living and breathing outside, but instead on the emphasis of individual needs. Through his continued exposure to a self-centered society Abram loses his wonder of nature. It is this mindset that alienates idealists from human society because they cannot find a place for themselves in an uncaring society.
the danger of the wildernes
Saturday, March 19, 2011
Revision
One of the common misconceptions we have about the wild is our conviction of its mundane property. Our minds immediately resort to the stereotypes we have developed over the years concerning the lifestyle in the countryside. We presume living in the wild would be similarly monotonous and, ironically, lifeless. Instead, Abram proves through his experience in the wild how it was completely engaging, especially to his sense. He admits, “I began to see and to hear in a manner I never had before…I became a student of subtle differences” (15). By experiencing the wilderness first hand, Abram became more aware of his surroundings. He uses the words “subtle differences” to show how his deep connection with nature allowed him to fully experience the different aspects of the wilderness. Abram eliminates the possibility that there is something to yawn about in the wilderness as he finds himself intrigued by details he himself may have once expected to be inconsequential. Krakauer reinforces Abram’s notion that the wilderness is far from monotonous through Muir’s elaborate description of the Sierra gale. Muir indicates how “never before did [he] enjoy so noble an exhilaration of motion. The Slender tops fairly flapped and swished in the passionate torrent, bending and swirling backward and forward, round and round” (363). In his observation, Muir uses vivid adjectives to describe the movement of the water. His usage of words suggests that the wilderness in fact influenced the way he perceives nature and its complex characteristics. The splashing of the water is a seemingly minor detail that Muir has found himself captivated by. Thus Muir has become “a student of subtle differences” in the same way Abram did. Krakauer’s selection of words to describe the object of Muir’s intrigue gives a concrete image to the abstract idea Abram expresses. They are in harmony in how they find joy in details that our ordinary untouched eyes would not find the same sentiment in. Hence, Abram’s distinct feel for natural beauty, which is similarly demonstrated in Krakauer reference of Muir’s detailed observation, prove how the wilderness is in fact more fascinating than our contemporary societies and, ultimately, defies our initial supposition.
Friday, March 18, 2011
Revision
Respect serves to build connections which link the opposing sides of a crisis. Abram’s essay, shows how building respect aids in solving problems. While in Nepal, Abram was puzzled by an offering that was being made to a household spirit which turned out to be a colony of ants. Using logic, he soon found that the offering of rice was to prevent an overwhelming invasion of the ants into the buildings on the island. Abram believes that “the offerings seemed to establish certain boundaries between the human and ant communities…the humans apparently hoped to persuade the insects to respect the boundary and not enter the buildings”(10). Although there is a boundary set between these two species, the rice offering allowed them to co-exist rather than becoming a problem. To gain respect from the ants, the Balinese first gave the same respect and acknowledgment to the ants. The respect is generated from the desire to set this boundary or difference between the species. While the Balinese introduce a boundary, Siebert introduces connections to remove the barrier of difference between human and animal. In Siebert’s essay, obvious and subtle traces of the connections made between elephants and humans can be found throughout his piece. He methodically reveals aspects of the “fabric of elephant society” which explains how elephants are “profoundly social creatures” that have family structures and even “engage in intense mourning and burial rituals” (529 – 530). These features of the elephant way of life can, in affect, be considered synonymous with that of humans. By shedding light upon the connections found in behavior research about elephants and knowledge about trauma from human neuroscience, Siebert further strengthens this shared bond of human and elephant. It is not until these connections are made that researchers begin to develop ways to restore the elephant society and heal them. This shows how elephants become worthy of extensive research once humans are able to bridge the gap with understanding of this animal. In this manner, Siebert’s respect for elephants is through similarities. Siebert asserts that the solution relies on mankind’s willingness to accept our similarities with elephants rather than only seeing the differences. Although this may be true, what of other entities in this world that humans may not fully understand or can explain? Finding similarities in them would be impossible, yet do they still deserve the same level of respect?
Thursday, March 17, 2011
Paragraph Revision
It is not by sending his awareness out beyond the natural world that the shaman makes contact with the purveyors of life and health, nor by journeying into his personal psyche; rather, it is by propelling his awarenes laterally, outward into the depths of a landscape at once both sensuous and psychological, the living dream that we share with the soaring hawk, the spider, and the stone silently sprouting lichens on its coarse surface. (8)
In order to survive in the wild, you must become one with the wild. Abram refers to the hawk, spider, and stone to drive home the point that you cannot select one aspect of the land to learn from, but must accept and acknowledge every pebble and creature you come across and try to understand their greater value to place in which they rest.
Revision
Modern day society views the wilderness as a separate world for species that are savage and primitive in the eyes of anthropocentric humans who treat the species as they please assuming that there will be no consequence for their actions. Siebert observes that some people mainly use elephants to generate revenue with no sympathy for what they are putting the elephants through. In addition, Siebert learns that “[w]ild-caught elephants often witness as young calves the slaughter of their parents, just about the only way, shy of a far more costly tranquilization procedure, to wrest a calf from elephants parents” (536). Humans are more concerned with the money they gain from using the elephants then the mental and physical health of the elephants. The elephants become mentally unstable from these experiences and seek revenge on humans. Nature and the animals that inhabit it play a more important role in human survival than people initially give credit for. The healers of Nepal, or shamans, understand how important nature truly is to human society. Abram explains how “[t]he [shamans’] primary allegiance, then, is not to the human community, but to the earthly web of relations in which that community is embedded” (6). In the eyes of the shamans, the human community is not as important as the larger ecological community and will fall apart if nature is not taken care of. The shamans are the medium that understands what both the human and ecological communities need to survive and how to keep them in balance. Shamans would not mentally hinder elephants because of greed, like the people in Siebert’s essay. The difference in morals of the two societies causes people to treat nature as their society shows to be acceptable. The separation of human and ecological communities causes an aggressive tension between the two. Furthermore, people find some parts of nature to be mysterious and full of secrets due to humans’ lack of understanding. This is why Chris McCandless ventured into the wilderness. It was so different from his society and unknown to him that he believed he could discover who he is if he spent some time in the wilderness. Krakauer explains how “[Chris] didn’t want to see a single person, no airplanes, no sign of civilization. He wanted to prove to himself that he could make it on his own, without anybody else’s help” (346). In order to have a temporary break from modern day society, McCandless must venture into the primitive and savage world of nature. The spiritual draw of nature intrigued Chris enough to travel away from the safety of society and into an environment unknown to him. In nature, McCandless was not that different from the aforementioned elephants explained by Siebert. McCandless shares a similar emotional connection to nature as the shamans of Nepal. They both realize the importance of understanding nature and the species that inhabit it. In order to discover if his confidence in his skills without the luxuries that come with modern day society were on par with what he was capable with, McCandless opened himself up to nature emotionally and spiritually.
Tuesday, March 15, 2011
Revision
As a result of the different perspectives of wilderness, it is easy to be judgmental of the environments that others live in without truly understanding the struggles it takes for someone who is lost in the wilderness. Krakauer received mail from several people about McCandless, many of them critical of McCandless’s trip. Krakauer recounted one letter saying, “Not only did McCandless die because he was stupid, one Alaska correspondent observed, but ‘the scope of his self-styled adventure was so small as to ring pathetic-squatting in a wrecked bus a few miles out of Healy potting jays and squirrels, mistaking a caribou for a moose (pretty hard to do)…Only one word for the guy: incompetent’” (358). The Alaskan correspondent clearly has a different view on wilderness than McCandless, placing the importance of wilderness in its proximity to civilization and focuses more on McCandless’s incompetence than towards the experience gained from living there. The correspondent’s view that civilization cannot be wilderness is contradicted by Eve Abe, who directly connects the perspectives of elephants and humans with the wilderness. As she is comparing the human and elephant orphans, she told Siebert of a conversation she had with a scientist in Kenya and “He said, ‘How come nobody has made this connection before?’ I told him because it hadn’t happened this way to anyone else’s tribe before” (534). Abe, herself, was affected by the wilderness that occurred when her tribe was forced to move due to war. Abe said that because of it, she sees wilderness in a way that nobody else could. The experience of living in the wild creates a perspective that seems foreign to those that have not been through the tribulations of being lost.
-Nelson
Monday, March 14, 2011
Revised Paragraph
Wilderness is no longer correctly described in civilized societies. Krakauer describes McCandless as an ambitious man seeking wilderness to rebuild his character free of civilization. But what he found, Krakauer reports “the wilderness surrounding the bus- the patch of overgrown country where McCandless was determined “to become lost in the wild”-scarely qualifies as wilderness by Alaskan standards” (350). McCandless was not an experienced wilderness man, he did not know the difference between the “overgrown country” from the real, raw and uncultivated piece of land. He was not lost and scared as previous details of Krakauer’s description tells us that where McCandless stayed it was barely classified as wilderness. It shows that a common man, whom Chris was, is not able to differentiate between wilderness and an overgrown nature field. McCandless’s struggling efforts to be in the wilderness that ultimately lead to his death can be best explained by the parallels that can be drawn from Siebert’s “An Elephant Crackup?” essay. Siebert explains that traumatic elephants are ever-seeking for wilderness and it’s the only place where they can function healthy. Siebert observes “even as we are forcing them [the wild elephants] out, it seems, the elephants are going out of their way to put us, the keepers, in an ever discomfiting place, challenging us to preserve someplace for them…”(540). Elephants are clearly showing their discontent by putting pressure on humans to preserve wilderness just for them. That’s why Chris McCandless was not able to fully engulf himself in the wilderness and successfully live of the land. Wilderness is not meant for the civilized world. Another author, David Abram brings up another point that people have to be exposed to wilderness in order to understand the needs of the larger ecological field. Abram explains “these [the “shamanic healing techniques” becoming popular in the west] are noble aims to be sure, yet they are secondary to and derivative from the primary role of the indigenous shaman, a role that cannot be fulfilled without long and sustained exposure to wild nature, to its patterns and vicissitudes”(16). In civilized western nations “the healers” can never achieve the same level of connection with nature that would allow the mediators of the nature to understand the current problems. As evident from “Into the Wild”, most people cannot differentiate and understand that wilderness is a lot more than what we just think, also wilderness is destroyed by the expansion of civilization.
Thursday, March 10, 2011
Body Paragraph Revised
Charles Siebert, who has personally engaged himself within the human elephant crises, found his meaning of wilderness with the help of his research of that crisis. During his time studying, observing the crises, and pondering about the bigger ecological issues, Siebert found wilderness to be much larger then he thought. Siebert made a keen observation which helps define what he feels wilderness is by claiming “saving them will require finally getting past ourselves; it will demand the ultimate act of deep interspecies empathy”(537). Siebert chose to use the word, interspecies, as of way of saying that humans need to be considerate of other species besides ourselves, which in essence can describe what wilderness is. Interspecies empathy means that wilderness as a whole is the species that humans co-habitat with.. David Abram’s definition of wilderness relates to Siebert’s definition that wilderness is a group of other species, although Abram’s theory on wilderness is different. Abram, during one of his trips to Indonesia, shares an experience that parallels Siebert’s. Abram describes wilderness to the reader in the passage, “Fireflies! It was in Indonesia, you see, that I was first introduced to the world of insects, and there that I first learned of the great influence that insects- such diminutive entities- could have upon the human senses”(3). The phrase, great influence, is important in making the connection between Siebert’s theory and Abram’s. This shows that Abram also finds importance in such primitive animals, considering them to be a part of the vast wilderness, or group of species that humans live with. Jon Krakauer, also makes an observation about his character, Mr. McCandless’, view of wilderness that is analogous to Siebert’s theory of wilderness being a group of species. One of the records recovered from McCandless’s journal shows the connection between him and the animals he hunts and lives with. McCandless, after hunting and killing a moose, reconsiders his actions. McCandless journal entry to the response of his actions states “Deliberate Living; Conscious attention to the basics of life, and a constant attention to your immediate environment and its’ concerns…” (352). Krakauer chose this quote from McCandless because it shows the important relationship between man and the other animals. McCandless makes it clear by stating, “constant attention to your immediate environment”, that wilderness, by his definition, is the animals he has hunted and lived with throughout his journey. Krakauer’s personal definition is different than Siebert’s, but this quote, that McCandless makes, portrays the other species humans live with as the definition of wilderness. While Siebert’s definition has aspects in common with the other two authors’, it is Abram who tends to believe that wilderness is not a group of animals but something else.